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...to continue reading. In the same token by the end of the introduction I had felt because of the attention phrases and almost personal level the intro put you on with Moore, I felt that I had read a commercial or a P.A. for the Moore for President Campaign. Although very informative it is not very objective to me. I would also like to know where the info for the quotes came from; you are speaking to me as if these are things I should already know which sort of make me feel bad for not knowing. (Not to mention that I had to look up some your big words, I am such a dummy.) Finally by the end of your intro I felt a little pressured to side with Moore and his view on the issues at hand. I just think you came on a little too strong, very well written but still a little strong. Now this is what I am talking about the approach you used to tackle this section was perfect for this. This is where you make your sell because you are obviously a Moore supporter. I just finished the paper and now I am thoroughly confuse...