Point of view
...rned how to use a vacuum cleaner. The windows across from my table were very dirty, you could barely see out of them. There was a cold air near our booth do to an emergency door exit located close to the table I was sat. The playing children kept bumping in to my table as if they had not noticed we were there. Across from the children and their family where three adults in another table smoking, as if they did not even notice they were in a non-smoking section. The calmness was fading as the time went on without receiving our meals. The more we waited the more we noticed others around us eating and others done, it felt as if we did not exist. The waitress approached us with the children’s entries. This being after everyone else had received their meals, including the family who had arrived as we were ordering. The waitress smiled ironically making my anger grow. I could no longer smell anything all I could think of was the feeling of hunger and anger as it grew inside me. After being approached by the manager on duty several times the meals arrived and the cold air coming form the exit door had cooled it down before we could finish the eating. I was so angry after the last time the manager approached me that I could not contained myself I was not hostile but I had to let her know how I was feeling. I was so bothered my eyes flared my voice cracked. Between every word I said I could not help bite my lip and my cheeks were turning a darker shade of red the more I thought about the situation. All this was do to the anger building up while awaiting my meals. The location I chose for my place description was a restaurant. I had seen many contrasting details as soon as I got there. The location was set up in a way that it was easy to find good and bad things in it. From lighting to cleanliness there was positive and negative. The pleasant paragraph described the restaurant to be well lit that also helped me see our table and the surrounding area in detailed. I emphasized on the light because most restaurant do not have much lighting hiding the most of the essence of the location. By this the other restaurants leave more to the customers imagination on what is going on around them in the restaurant. In the first paragraph I described the waitress physically, moreover, I painted a picture of her to include her smile. On the other hand, I described her smile twice as a tiresome one in the first paragraph and as an ironic one in the second. When I first got the restaurant she looked tired but I later noticed she only smiled because she had to not because she was pleased to have us as customers. These details allowed me to show the reader to picture the mood and moment I was going thru at that a particular moment. I also added other details in the negative narration to set the tone and mood of the moment. ...