Lapham
... sure that he/she does not use “you” in her paper; instead they use “one.” It is very effective that he/she brings specific examples into the paper, particularly the conclusion. Unlike the author in the second essay, he/she brings a little more complex vocabulary into the picture. Although it is not to powerful for the essay. This author uses strong commentary so that no questions are left behind and we know firmly what side he is arguing. History is a huge part of the understanding of this essay. Every sentence, especially in the conclusion, goes directly back to the point that is trying to be addressed. that he/she brings specific examples into the paper, particularly the conclusion. Unlike the author in the second essay, he/she brings a little more complex vocabulary into the picture. Although it is not to powerful for the essay. This author uses strong commentary so that no questions are left behind and we know firmly what side he is arguing. History is a huge part of the understanding of this essay. Every sentence, especially in the conclusion, goes directly back to the poin...