Cloustreet Essay on Textual Integrity
...ue defines their class of people; the characters use idioms like ‘carn’ in place of ‘come on’ and the recognisable events such as the Nedlands Murders give the text, textual integrity. Winton creates viable, believable and realistic characters by using dialogue, specific language techniques and point of view. Winton uses multiple narrators; Omniscient, stream of consciousness (Fish, Oriel) and interior monologue (Rose, Lester). It’s Fish’s spiritual narration that lets the reader in on otherwise inaccessible information which is unattainable from the other often inarticulate characters. Inarticulateness, Australian vernacular and alcoholism, were Australian traits evident in many novels and plays written about Post-War Australia such as “The Touch of Silk” by Betty Roland and “Summer of the Seventeenth Doll” by Ray Lawler. This shows Cloudstreet was a true depiction of Post-War, poorly educated, working class, Aussie battlers and shows its viability and textual integrity. Winton enhances the textual integrity of his novel by giving the characters distinctly Australian qualities and they fit the Western Australian war time period they are placed in. The characters are all laconic and use colloquialisms such as that on page 399; “Lon Lamb has taken a sickie off work” Dolly is sarcastic and cynical. When Sam lost his fingers all Dolly could say was; “His bloody working hand. A man could hardly pick his nose with a thumb and half a pointer. They were done for; stuffed, cactus. Thank you, Lady Luck, you rotten slut.” Winton’s Character’s carefully chosen names evoke an image into the reader’s mind of what the character should be. These ideas are immediately vanquished. Take Rose, a rose is a delicate flower with fine features and a beautiful aura but Rose Pickles is a hateful woman, though beautiful she is spiteful and hard. Dolly is just like her daughter, in that she is hardened. Dolly is also an alcoholic and sex-crazed woman who spends most of her time at the pub drinking and vying for male attention. These two strong women contradict their pleasant names and also hate each other. Fish, like the creatures, observe the immeasurable depths of experience and all he can think about is the river. The surnames of the two Cloudstreet families are Pickles and Lamb. A club sandwich with so many characteristics all piled under the same roof of Cloudstreet. Cloudstreet is written using a paradox. Although Fish is intellectually disabled he is the main narrator in the book. Once favourite, who after the accident became “stuck somewhere… like he’s half in and half out”. “Not all of Fish had come back” and in his half state of life he’s become a spiritually liberated and insightful being. His refusal to acknowledge his mother’s presence is ironic because it if wasn’t for her stubborn and sheer will power Fish would never have come back at all. Winton uses symbolism and themes (the black man, house and river) as a central part of Cloudstreet, especially the river. All the major life changing events take place at the river; Fish drowns then gets brought back to life, Rose and Quick acquaint themselves, Quick and his mother open up to each other and then finally Fish dies there. The setting has been given life by Winton as he explores Australia. He uses personification to show a connectedness between humanity and the land. He also uses personification when he writes about the house that “moans and groans” with the lost souls of the indigenous Australians. The house along with the river is the place where everything starts and finishes (circular structure). The house brings the two families together and it’s the place where the two families really are brought together when Quick and Rose make love to each other and Dolly and Lester have sex. Fish also understands the room that nobody else can be...