arg essay
...althy • Just because the people of Plainsville go to the gym and exercise, they’ll be interested in buying health food and other health products. (P3) Second the argument never addresses… • “Has more members than ever,” how many members do they actually have? • “All time high” compared to what? • What their previous experience is. • If the kids enjoy this class? (P4) Finally the argument omits….. • How many members in a class • How many classes • Why the kids are required to take the class • The merchants can be fudging #s b/c they want a new store. • What healthy means (P5) Thus, the argument is not completely sound. The evidence in support of the conclusion…..Ultimately, the argument might have been strengthened by…. Counter example- “Previous experience has shown that our stores are most profitable in areas where residents are highly concerned with leading healthy lives.” “The local health club nearly closed 5 years ago due to lack of business.” Who’s ...