Original writing
The police officer strolled away putting his truncheon back into his belt; he went back into his police car driving away fast leaving a smog of smoke behind from the exhaust. I angrily went back into my car and carried on with my journey to work in the early hours of the morning. The fuel was running low so I decided to stop at a petrol station and filled my car with petrol as I was going to pay for the petrol, I saw a man being hit with a bat on his head he was shouting out “help, help!” in a muffled voice, the man who was attacking the man was wearing a black balaclava over his head also he was wearing a black jacket and black trousers, I froze for a second thinking of what should I do. I top it took action by shouting out “stop it” loudly; the man stopped and ran off in a flash of a second. By this time the man who had been attacked was unconscious on the pavement. I ran to the man who was attacked on the pavement he was bleeding severely on his head. I shouted at the man at the working at the petrol station to “call an ambulance”. I took off my jacket and ripped off a piece of my chequered Shirt, to put it on the mans head to control the bleeding. An ambulance rushed to the scene, I checked the mans pulse on his neck there was no pulse. The ambulance crew came out with there equipment , I told them there was no pulse. The ambulance crew tried to revive the man the man. After 6 minutes of reviving there was still no pulse the ambulance crew pronounced the man dead at the scene. The had now been the scene of a murder the blood of the man was all over the pavement my hands had blood all over them.