Admissions Essay
I wrote this for acceptance into a private high school, but it could be edited to fit college acceptance needs, especially for transfer students. Consider replacing "your school" with, obviously, the name of your chosen school. I’ve always thrived under pressure and craved a challenge. I use my competitive drive to set high standards for and to better myself. I have goals and ambitions like most people, and am always looking for a more efficient strategy to accomplish them. I feel that your school would complement my goals and allow me to obtain the education I desire. I love my home school. I have invested countless hours into helping to improve it.