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In the early and later drafts of a prose passage written by Hemmingway you can see where he made addition and deletions. ... The passage records Hemmingway’s ideas of how the experience of war affected his attitude towards language and the passage composition. All of Hemmingway’s revisions were made to make the passage more: emotional, powerful, personal and clear.
Hemmingway leaves bits and pieces of the early draft alone and edits other sections. ... By being more specific than just saying places Hemmingway helps the reader paint a better picture in their minds.
Approximate Word count = 438 Approximate Pages = 1.8 (250 words per page double spaced)
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